Daily NaNoWriMo 2011 Word Count: Day 8

11,081 ♦ 50,000 (22.16%)

Uuuuuuuuuuuuuugh...

My writing sucks. :| Too many repetitive actions. Everybody nods and smiles. It's all telling the action and plot and not enough showing. Detached and clinical are words that are coming to mind to describe my writing style...or lack thereof, more accurately.

I know, I know, that's what revisions are for, but if I can't even come up with something more than "he nodded and snorted" the first time around, what makes me think I can do better the second?